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Once upon a time, there was a mermaid called Mini and a pilot called James. Mini loved to swim in the ocean!

One day Mini saw James ship, she started to swim over to james.Mini got on james ship. “Hello can I please come on your ship?” asked Mini “Sure climb aboard.” yelled James. “Thanks” screamed Mini. And away they went.

Mini and James started to swim. Soon enough they were tired. They stopped looked back… and the ship was gone!

James shouted “there's an island over there” Mini and James happily swam back to the island.