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L.G  elaborate my ideas

Charter description

Mr D has blue eyes like the ocean. Mr D has blond hair like the color of the sand you find on a beach.

Mr D has jumpers that support the all blacks. Mr D has brown shoes the shape of a triangle.

Mr D is as funny as a joke book. He is also happy, kind and caring.

Mr D loves rugby and cricket. Mr D likes rugby because he is always wearing sporty things like rugby and cricket.

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L.G punctuation & spelling

S.O.S punctuation

Once upon a time, there was a mermaid called Mini and a pilot called James. Mini loved to swim in the ocean!

One day Mini saw James ship, she started to swim over to james.Mini got on james ship. “Hello can I please come on your ship?” asked Mini “Sure climb aboard.” yelled James. “Thanks” screamed Mini. And away they went.

Mini and James started to swim. Soon enough they were tired. They stopped looked back… and the ship was gone!

James shouted “there's an island over there” Mini and James happily swam back to the island.

Nursery rhyme

L.G punctuation          

Hundreds of kids

playing on bars.

One fell off

And saw stars.

Children ran off to tell.

He will be back to ring the school bell