made of more

Made of More

SOS

1 hook in                               

2 brief summary

3 raiting

4 quality

5 positives negatives

The cloud came from sea to land

The more he seen the more he done

The world could not stop him.

In this movie report a cloud came from sea he was different from the rest. This cloud was made of more he rushed to fires and he gave his power to put them out. And he made light with his lightning strikes.

The positives on this movie report were most of it made sense it was a great film action movie and I really enjoyed it.

The negatives were it needed more sentences throughout the movie because there were only 7 sentences describing what had happened.  

This cloud was definitely made of more.

I give this movie a 4 out of 5

the lego story

Lego story

What is involved in a book/movie report?

Have you ever been playing with lego and wondered how was it created? Well in the late 1934 this man had to close down his workshop, Because they were running out of money to pay the bills. So all the workers left with no job, he was not tempted to give up.

After the man started making wooden toys like trucks and ducks. One day a royal man come to check out all the toys then he wanted all the stock for the summer holiday, so they started working all day and all night. But all of a sudden they got a phone call saying that he doesn’t have enough money to pay for all the toys.   

In 1951 they went through a fire and remake the workshop it was 30 metres bigger. After that in 1972 they had a bigger fire and nothing was useful! He was not tempted to give up.                

Cats

Imagine, finding a cat that adours you and you can keep it for life. After a horrible day after school doing spelling test and other stuff all you want is to lay down with your pet cat it will become your shadow wherever you go they will go. So what do you do stop imaging and have this experience yourself.

Firstly, did you know cats are one of the most popular pets in the world. There are over 500 million domestic cats. Cats conserve their energy by sleeping for an average of 12 to 16 hours a day. Thats 70% of a cat's life. The domestic cat is a small, typically furry, carnivorous mammal often called “House cats.”

Secondly, did you know cats can’t taste sweetness and spice? If cats smell spice it's not good for them. That's why cat treats are not available in pet stores. Scientists do know that cat’s can taste things we cannot taste.For years it was known but not truly understood. Sugar and spice and everything nice? Not so much for cats.

Thirdly, did you know humans and cats have been associated for over 10000 years that's a long time. Cats can live for an average of 13 to 17 years. In the wild cats live for 4 to 5 years. The oldest cat lived to 28 years old!!Also where you aware that a group of three cats is called a clower?

Finally, I really hope you will get a pet cat and if you do just remember these facts to keep your cat healthy and strong.

  

Dear Mr Peters

I am writing to you to recommend that you should join with National.

Firstly, National is going to give lower taxes to people so they have more money to spend on stuff they actually need like Groceries, Rent, Petrol, Houses, Apartments, Tickets, Internet and Phone bills.

Secondly, National is going to make no water bills, so people have more money in their pockets to spend on gifts for their friends and family.

Thirdly, Labor is going to make money to clean rivers and forget about all the people in need. Bill english is going to make money and help the parents raise their kids.

Well Mr Peters I have come to an end I really hope you will pick national.

     

Masterchef

On monday 11th september 2017, the year 5/6 students at stratford primary school had the experience of cooking up a restaurant with real food from supermarkets and decorations made from paper.

When I look through the kitchen door I see chaos dishes and excitement. People were running around finding plates to dish up.

The wonderful French Flamingos put together some amazing dishes. Like a creamy onion soup filled with beef stock. And a potato bacon and cheese all melted together for a beautiful taste. Everyone loved the chocolate moose that had whipped cream made by real chefs.

Overall, I think this was a great experience filled with laughter and enjoyment.

5.9.17

Why year ⅚ should be in charge of the pe shed

L.G  Correct punctuation

Mr moore year ⅚ should be in charge of the pe shed here are three reasons why.

Firstly, the year ⅞ students are disrespectful to the juniors and the year ⅚. Because when you return 1 thing but still have another thing out they tell you to return both. Also they throw things at their customers.

Secondly, we would be better role models to the junior syndicate. Like not throwing things at people, cleaning up after we finish and greeting people as they come up.

Thirdly, year ⅚ are not disrespectful to all the juniors we are really nice, kind and caring apart for the seniors they don’t even talk to them all they say is “what's your name, what room and what you want to issue.”

Finally, I hope you have changed your mind about the year ⅚ doing the pe shed.

23.8.17

L.G  elaborate my ideas

Charter description

Mr D has blue eyes like the ocean. Mr D has blond hair like the color of the sand you find on a beach.

Mr D has jumpers that support the all blacks. Mr D has brown shoes the shape of a triangle.

Mr D is as funny as a joke book. He is also happy, kind and caring.

Mr D loves rugby and cricket. Mr D likes rugby because he is always wearing sporty things like rugby and cricket.

8.8.17

L.G punctuation & spelling

S.O.S punctuation

Once upon a time, there was a mermaid called Mini and a pilot called James. Mini loved to swim in the ocean!

One day Mini saw James ship, she started to swim over to james.Mini got on james ship. “Hello can I please come on your ship?” asked Mini “Sure climb aboard.” yelled James. “Thanks” screamed Mini. And away they went.

Mini and James started to swim. Soon enough they were tired. They stopped looked back… and the ship was gone!

James shouted “there's an island over there” Mini and James happily swam back to the island.

Nursery rhyme

L.G punctuation          

Hundreds of kids

playing on bars.

One fell off

And saw stars.

Children ran off to tell.

He will be back to ring the school bell

25.7.17                                                                              charter                                                                                                                                         

Three little pigs                                                                  setting                                                                                                                              

L.G punctuation (. ? ! …)                                                    action

S.O.S  -capital letters end punctuation                           problem

Every sentence                                                              solution

Once upon a time there lived three pig a cute fluffy wolf and a old village.

One day the cute fluffy wolf made some cupcakes for his dare old granny and ran out of sugar. So he walked down the stoney footpath to his nextdoor neighbor's house.

The first house was a pigs house. He rung the doorbell gently and said “little pig are you in I need some sugar?” No one answered the door so he huffed and he puffed and blew the straw house down. The poor little pig ran to the next house.

So the second pig wasn't very smarter than the first pig since his house was made of sticks. The big bad wolf knocked on the door and said with a soft delicate voice “Can I please use some sugar?” “Go away.” so he huffed and he puffed and he blew the stick house down. The first pig and the second pig ran to the brick house.

The third little pig was the smartest of them all because he built his house was made of bricks. Mr wolf didn’t ask because he knew he was going to say NO so he huffed and he puffed and tried to blow the brick house down. Nothing happened  so he climbed up the chimney and fell in no he landed in the pot.

So in the end mr wolf was never seen again and the three little pigs lived happily ever after.

 

Monday 26.6.17

L.G Use precise verbs

S.O.S -Add humor

         -Haven’t used get grab or put

How to fly a flying machine

Hi everyone in these days everyone wants to be creative with old junk. That’s why I am going to use simple steps to help you fly a flying machine.

Step 1: With the old useful junk junk try build a something useful like a plane.

Step2: Turn on your machine by pushing a button

Step 3: Make sure you have a long runway unlike the man on the movie.

Step 4: Also open the shep doors before turning your machine on.

Step 5: Now drive out of the shed placing your foot on the the pedal and you will hopefully fly off.

I’m sure if you follow these simple step you will know how to fly a flying machine.

20.6.17

L.G use language appropriate for your audience.

S.O.S -bossy verbs

         -simple steps

How to survive a day at school.

Materials

Eyes

Ears

Good adducted

Hi everyone, if your teacher will not leave you alone during class time, listen to these simple steps and you will have a brilliant day at school.

Step 1: Try not to annoy your classmates that’s what bothers your teacher the most.

Step 2: Definitely don’t call out otherwise your teacher might blow up.

Step 3: Try not get in any trouble at all.

Step 4: Don’t cut the track you run around at read and feed.

Step 5: Make sure all your writing work is TIDY or you will have to restart.

Step 6: Bring your teacher chocolate or something with sugar.

I hope you have learnt how to survive a day at school.

20th March 2017

Caitlin Gilzean & Ava Hancock

Room 6

Stratford Primary School

Regan Street

Stratford

Dear David

Thank you for coming to camp and giving up your time to be there even though you were really busy!!

We really liked that you came to Dawson Falls with room six for the rest of the day and being an amazing, helping hand packing up the bus.

We really appreciated you making this camp possible for Room Six. Once again, thanks for helping out at camp.

Your Sincerely                

Caitlin Gilzean

Ava Hancook

Swing Bridge

L.G.Describe your sense in a moment

As I waited for  my turn to the swing bridge. Come on! Finally, the last person comes off. I duck under the big metal bar. Step one… two… three… I reach out to grab onto the metal wire on the edge. I feel the coldness shocking it’s way to my fingertips. I’m in the middle as I look over the the metal wire. 50 metres down I hear the sound of water crashing against slippery mossy rocks.come on photo I see the camera coming towards my face I just want to run back but i can’t it starts all over step one… two...three… finally my last step, I feel relieved.